LWS V3C39 A Lot of Dual Cultivation

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Su Yan felt like crying. He had wanted to be really secretive about it and only reveal it when he really posted the first chapter but now the readers already knew! This was so unfair!
He turned to Nie Chang and pouted, waiting for him to come and pacify him. Unfortunately, his boyfriend was really busy and didn’t notice his miserable state.
Hmph. He didn’t need his help anyway!
He turned back to the screen and scrolled down for other questions. Ah, he’d just ignore the other comments for now! Most likely, most readers wouldn’t have —
Little Water Fairy: [I read in another comment that the story will be about a master and his disciple? Is that true?! ヾ(o✪‿✪o)シ)] Weiterlesen

LWS V3C38 How Did They Find Out?!

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Su Yan pondered a bit and finally decided to use a simple pet name. After all, Ziju An would call his disciple by his name later on anyway and even if he used a pet name he would probably change it later on when Dou Fang Hai grew up a little.
[„You’re such a cute little dumpling. How could I not like you?“
Dou Fang Hai pursed his lips. He obviously didn’t think of himself as a cute little dumpling at all. „I’m a man!“
„Uh, sure you are. Actually, I’m a man, too.“ Ziju An smiled. This was the first thing he had to teach his new disciple. He couldn’t return to the Jin Shan Sect with him if he always called him ‚pretty sister‘, could he?
Dou Fang Hai looked the person in front of him up and down. The person had snowy-white hair, almost translucent skin and a pair of sparkling golden eyes. Furthermore, he was way too slender for a real man! Weiterlesen

LWS V3C37 You Can Disinherit Me!

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Nie Chang winced. Su Yan’s dad was calling him? Just how had that happened? Hadn’t he slapped him the last time he saw him so that Su Yan had to be brought to the hospital?
Su Yan wasn’t any less mystified. This really … was too unexpected. „You … Why are you calling me?“
Su Yan’s father sighed. „Xiao Yan, I’m sorry, alright? I … overreacted the last time.“
„Oh.“
Su Yan didn’t know what else to say and an awkward silence stretched between them. Well, there hadn’t been much to talk about in the last few years since he moved out and now even that thing on the weekend had happened. It was probably to be expected.
Mister Su cleared his throat. „So … Nie Chang is your boyfriend now?“
Su Yan’s gaze flitted about. Was this some kind of trap? Well, even if it was, he didn’t care what his father thought! He had such a good boyfriend he wouldn’t let anyone malign him! Especially not his father! He didn’t care about that guy at all. Weiterlesen

LWS V3C36 Sweet Little … Daddy?!

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Su Yan covered his mouth with both hands and giggled. Ah, his readers certainly wouldn’t expect this! They would probably fall off their chair or tumble down where they stood or … well, lucky them if they were already lying down.
Alright, considering that all experts in his new story were total beauties it wasn’t that unexpected either that some of them would be mistaken for women every now and then. It was just that his readers couldn’t know that at this point in time. Mn, he really was such a good author …
He tapped the case of his notebook thoughtfully. This wouldn’t ruin the image of the great master, right? Maybe he should have added an explanation that they were all super beautiful at the spot where the sect master and all the Elders were gathered in that room? Weiterlesen

LWS V3C35 Pretty Sister

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[The three disciples of the Jin Shan Sect had soon prepared everything for the test. The two men stood next to their respective platforms while the female disciple stepped to the front of the stage and addressed the crowd in front.
„We’re going to hold the preliminary tests for the admission to the Jin Shan Sect now. All children between the age of five and ten may come onto the stage and test for spirit veins. You only have to pick up one of the spiritual energy detection orbs we’ve placed on the three platforms here. If it lights up, you’re qualified to follow us to the Jin Shan Sect and take the real sect admission test.“ The woman stepped back and moved into position next to the third platform.
On the market square, the people started pushing and shoving and soon enough a group of children was rumbling up the steps of the stage in an unorderly manner. Weiterlesen

LWS V3C34 Get Back to Work!

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Su Yan jumped up and down on his chair and turned to Nie Chang to get some praise. His boyfriend looked up from his work and couldn’t help but laugh.
„You finished something?“
Su Yan dashed over with an expression of ‚it’s good that you asked!‘ and planted himself on Nie Chang’s lap again. „You know I was fretting over the beginning of my new novel just half an hour ago and now I’ve suddenly solved the issue! Isn’t that great?!“
„Mn.“ Nie Chang patted his head. „As expected. Your husband always knew you’re the best.“
Su Yan just grinned. Hmph, whoever dared say that he had a stupid username should be ashamed! He’d show them just how much insight his husband had! He really was the best! They’d see! Weiterlesen

LWS V3C33 A Tenacious Spirit

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Su Yan gave a satisfied sigh. Ah, this was such a good new first scene! Taking his time really had been so worth it. Furthermore, it was also a scene that was long enough. Well, for a romance novel. If this was a real xianxia novel, then the readers would probably jeer him for calling this a scene.
Well, whatever. He didn’t need to think about that. What he needed to do now was adjusting his previous first scene to fit with the new one. Mn, maybe he should even add another scene?
He pursed his lips but even after pondering it for a bit he wasn’t too sure. Well, he still had some time so it wouldn’t be too late to decide later. Thus, he just started to write the part about Ziju An’s time in the Jin He City. Whether or not this would be a whole scene or just the first part of the scene in which Dou Fang Hai went up to the stage … Who cared? He’d see about that.
[Ziju An sat at the window of the second floor of a teahouse.] Weiterlesen

LWS V3C32 The Male Lead Makes His Appearance

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[Ziju An looked back at this junior martial brother of his and smiled lightly. „Naturally …“ He paused and Xue Chang Fu’s face lit up. Unfortunately, Ziju An still continued his response. „I’ll follow the Sect Master’s arrangements.“
With the white robe lending a shimmer to his face and that smile on his lips that made his eyes curve slightly, Ziju An made a very amicable impression. The other men in the room couldn’t help but look at him and wait if he would say anything else. What kind of insight might this great master impart them?
Xue Chang Fu smiled back even more brightly. He lacked Ziju An’s enigmatic charisma, though. „Your glib tongue surprises me each time anew. The Sect Master is asking for your opinion, not what you’re going to do. In the end, won’t you do whatever you want anyway? But I tell you, you won’t get around taking in a disciple this time! I don’t care who it is but you will take in a disciple!“
Ziju An continued to smile. „Is that so?“ Weiterlesen

LWS V3C31 The System’s Suggestions

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Su Yan pursed his lips and stared at the screen of his phone for a while before he just opened the system on his notebook. He navigated back to the practice tasks for beginnings and this time he chose the option where he could upload a first version of the start of his novel.
He wasn’t sure if it would even work considering that it was only one chapter and even such a short one and that the system would count a fifth of the whole story as the beginning. But he really didn’t know what else to do. The hints the system had given him were probably not that bad but he had no idea how to implement them. So … maybe it would become easier if the system gave him some feedback for this scene specifically.
Well, the system had at least no problem with judging this scene as his beginning. As soon as Su Yan clicked on [submit] it started working and a row of messages once again rolled across the screen. Weiterlesen

LWS V3C30 Why Did the System Become So Useless?

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[If you have managed to catch the attention of a potential reader with your cover art, title, and synopsis, the beginning of your story is what ultimately draws them in and makes them decide whether or not they want to continue to follow your story. Thus, the quality of your beginning roughly equals the probability of gaining new readers.]
„Yes, yes, yes …“ Su Yan couldn’t help but roll his eyes.
Wasn’t this common knowledge? Who would want to read a story with a shitty beginning? He impatiently clicked [next] in hope of getting an actual hint as to how he should write a beginning.
[A good beginning needs to fulfill two tasks: Weiterlesen