<< previous chapter || next chapter >> An awkward silence enveloped the dining room. Mister Su clenched his fists, prepared to smash them on the table or maybe on that bastard’s face. Madam Su looked at the ceiling and wondered if maybe she should have advised Su Yan to not wait for so long. Nie …
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LWS V3C62 Striking Home
<< previous chapter || next chapter >> Nie Chang sighed. "I’m sorry. I didn’t think of that." He turned back and tried to inconspicuously rub off the oil on his cheek. Unfortunately, just at this moment, his boyfriend rediscovered his conscience. "Ah, don’t be sad! I didn’t mean it like that!" To make sure his …
LWS V3C61 A Deadly Weapon
<< previous chapter || next chapter >> "Alright, alright. Get back to your seat and eat." Nie Chang hurriedly pressed his little darling back onto his chair before Su Yan could do anything else. Seeing the smile still on his lips his hands started sweating. Would he live through this evening or would Mister Su …
LWS V3C60 Start Simple
<< previous chapter || next chapter >> Mister Su gritted his teeth. This bastard! Not only had he led his son astray, now he even dared to behave this atrociously in his house! He’d teach this guy a lesson! "Ah Yan, come on, have some more." Madam Su ignored her husband and instead gave her …
LWS V3C59 Acting All Pretentious
<< previous chapter || next chapter >> One and a half hours later, Su Yan and Nie Chang stood in front of the house of the Su’s, the former’s expression disgruntled. Nie Chang didn’t mind and rang the doorbell while gently patting his boyfriend’s back. Su Yan would certainly calm down soon. When Madam Su …
LWS V3C58 Why Did He Write in the First Place?
<< previous chapter || next chapter >> Su Yan told Nie Chang the whole story while starting to sob again. "So doesn’t this mean that I really can’t write? Uwuwu, this isn’t fair! I’ve been writing for so long! Why did I never notice how bad I was?" "Aiya …" Nie Chang pulled him closer …
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LWS V3C57 They Were Right After All
<< previous chapter || next chapter >> Looking at the pink progress bar Su Yan pursed his lips and grumbled some curses. This thing was indeed bullying him! Why did it seem as if the progress hadn’t changed at all?! Could it really be that he wouldn’t get experience points for these writing style practice …
LWS V3C56 The Final Version
<< previous chapter || next chapter >> While Nie Chang still wondered what he could do to make sure his boyfriend wouldn’t worry Su Yan had already cajoled himself and had gone back to working with the system. He felt like he had understood what those fillers were about. Taking a casual look at the …
LWS V3C55 He Absolutely Had to Obtain Him
<< previous chapter || next chapter >> Su Yan clicked on the [next] button below the text and finally saw something helpful. [Examples of fillers are words showing a vague degree like 'slightly' or 'almost'. Other filler words don’t signify a degree but add the same vagueness to your sentences. Examples of that would be …
LWS V3C54 Fishing for Experience Points
<< previous chapter || next chapter >> Su Yan sighed. It was already too late now. He would just look at the suggestions and see if there was anything he could use for editing the scene. After all, the system hadn’t said that there was some limit to the number of edits he could make. …
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